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The Fear of Losing Air


My love will force you to lose your patience
But I'll be there to win it for you..
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  1. rivercatNovember 18, 2010 at 8:53 PM

    hope you had a nice break.
    land on me when you jump off the cliff or something like that :))

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  2. BeyondNovember 18, 2010 at 9:11 PM

    hey Rob.. I had a refreshing break from everything and now life has got me back :)
    Thanks for your love :) :)

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  3. Beyond HorizonNovember 18, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    missed ur few words of love n wisdom!!!

    d words n pic expressed it all :)

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  4. WritingsForLifeNovember 18, 2010 at 9:40 PM

    ah that is something unique :-)

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  5. Vishal RajNovember 18, 2010 at 11:09 PM

    So, who wins finally; and for whom ?? Being in love is always beautiful.

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  6. Nothing but "Ficus"November 19, 2010 at 1:16 AM

    Whoa! That does sound really unconditional. If not a little unrealistic. I think true love always goes under appreciated.

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  7. Sneh SagrikaNovember 19, 2010 at 1:26 AM

    I wish all that you write.. is heard.. and u get the best companion ever..

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  8. Blasphemous AestheteNovember 19, 2010 at 8:34 PM

    two small lines, yet they have a lasting effect if used to the one they are meant for.
    Nice...

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  9. JoyNovember 19, 2010 at 9:17 PM

    But who will win mine back for me...my love has flown to a world unknown.

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  10. BeyondNovember 19, 2010 at 9:51 PM

    @Khushi- I'll win it for her, and I'll bring her love back from the unknown world.. and then I'll be done, I can silently walk away.

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  11. Gazal BharadwajNovember 20, 2010 at 2:49 PM

    @ Beyond And when you are done, why will you silently walk away.........

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  12. MeghaNovember 20, 2010 at 10:05 PM

    nice lines :)

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  13. Harshad MehtaNovember 21, 2010 at 12:03 AM

    Something different. Like it.

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  14. joie de vivreNovember 22, 2010 at 10:18 PM

    ..woah..that's killin..direct dil se..

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