The story starts: She was an innocent prisoner, a victim of circumstances, a victim of this cruel, canny world and was serving her sentence in a prison awaiting execution. He was in the same prison, about to be freed and he met her one day. He saw her innocence, he deeply thought of what she termed as a crime. 'No', he said, 'you ought to be free'. He decided to set her free. He fought for her and the doors of the prison were opened for her but she refused to be freed... She denied to come out. But the man was determined to set her free, he did not give up, he had to take her out, he broke all the walls of the prison, he was fatally wounded by the time the last wall was broken. She was sitting at the same place unmoved and she screamed at him, "Whyyyyyyyy? Why stranger.......... why you? Why..... when because of whom I am here, he never cared to bring down the walls.... why you?" For the last time his dying eyes met hers and he said .................. T
Funny touch 2 ur writings...quite different :)
ReplyDelete'Gehraai ki pehchaan ki paani saaf rahe,
ReplyDeletejo bhi chahe le parakh jalashay ke tal ko...
gehraai ka hai bhed chupa unka keval,
jo jaan bhooj gandla karte apne jal ko'
At times its shallow.
At times its deep but filled with obscurity and malice....
In both cases, you can't reach the dpth...
:)
You know an infant can drown in only two inches of water,
ReplyDeleteOur hearts may just be forever young.
empty vessels make the loudest noise!!
ReplyDelete@BH- no funny touch.. none.
ReplyDeleteYes..got dat..understood it wen i read again..
ReplyDeleteThanks 4 d reply...
well you never know - you have to give them the benefit of the doubt :-)
ReplyDeleteit's the feeling.. love.. a glass of water when she is coughing.. a peck on her cheek, a bar of chocolate.. these are all small things but with deep feelings!!
ReplyDeleteWords are shallow-actions are deep.
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