The Day I Disappear


You turned back and I was gone.
Did you feel that the place is less crowded now or
Did I leave you feeling alone.....

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  1. I do feel that the place is less crowded now.. I feel this. <3

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  2. definitely lonely even in crowd.....beautifully expressed :)

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  5. you definately left me feeling alone.
    even in the place full of others.

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  6. I would not wait for you to come back,
    But I choose that the last point in life
    when we were together, marks the
    end of my journey

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  8. these lines...the pain....speechless!!!

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