The Victim Of Love - 2


The story:
She was a charming, bubbly girl and was in love with a man. She often used to talk about her perfect life, perfect love and awaited a perfect marriage with her man. She thought all the happiness of the world was in her feet and she could ask for no more. When all the things were going so well suddenly her man started to pull back and get distant. Eventually her man broke up with her, and worst he never gave her a reason.
Shattered, broken... she was left. She found content in the cloud of cigarette smoke that covered her real face, she drank many a times just to get away from this grief.
Then there was He, not the man she loved but her friend He. He looked at her wet eyes one day when she came to the office and then the next and then the next day. He saw this charming girl going silent all of the sudden. He saw her guzzling beers and puffing cigars. He went to her one day, snatched and threw her cigar. At that very moment he noticed a tear roll down her eye and his hands reached her eyes to wipe off that tear. She stared at him and asked him, "Whyyyyyyyy? When the person whom I thought to be that one person in my life who will come running to me no matter what even if he sees my eyes getting wet.... turned his back and walked away... Why the hell do you care about my cries???"
He looked straight in her eyes and said ..................

To the reader's :- Yet again I need your help... please finish this. Write for the girl and write for this boy. Thanks.

Comments

  1. oh... I don't know what he says....

    but I hope she loves him back!

    "I can't stand to see your blue eyes drown, I'd like to be the one to make them shine, if you'll have me?"

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  2. thats so emotionall...hey i cant think ...but i m sure u have smthing best to tell

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  3. I am the one who will never let you cry and will always be with you till I die..........

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  4. I hate the smell of cigars!!...and the last thing I want to see are those long, gorgeous eyelashes catch on fire and burn the whole place to the ground. So, how about some dinner? They make a great hippo snout with honey nut sauce here... or perhpas youd prefer the tea bagged salmon with sensual salsa along with a toasted fluffernutter side??

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  5. @rivercat, omg! u have said it so nicely!! lovely!!
    nywaz wats my take.........
    guy : ur wet eyes are removing your makeup..u should use waterproof eyemakeup..k k ....hey listen, this beutiful creation of god looks the best when she wears a smile on her face. so will this beautiful lady accompany me for a short drive and den some dinner?
    i think m not good at it at alllllllllll !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  6. Boy: Who told you that I care for these cries? And maybe that is why I want them to get lost forever, your cries. I wish I could replace them with a lustrous shine in your eyes. Would you allow me to try, to make this wish come true?

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  7. the girl is the victim as usual ... what a cliche!

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  8. nazia hookum daar

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  9. He said, "I hate tears... in your eyes!"


    On a lighter note, he could say - Let us walk through smoggy rains - Smog will hide your ciggie smoke & rain will hide your tears!

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  10. " Be Practical and concentrate on your life, your career and your ambitions ".

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  11. @Kay- yes no one knows what he said but what I wished was for your end to it and it is lovely, that's a beautiful proposal
    "I can't stand to see your blue eyes drown, I'd like to be the one to make them shine, if you'll have me?"

    @Rohini-hmm I was exactly in the same shoe and hence I left an open end and see now I have so many lovely ends.

    @Anon 1- really, that's a tough promise to make.

    @Rob- A million thanks, I could have not made the end so delightful.. you got this girl man.

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  12. @Megha- you got it just right "this beutiful creation of god looks the best when she wears a smile on her face" I hope the girl reads this and can smile.

    @Blasphemous Aesthete- "I wish I could replace them with a lustrous shine in your eyes" this is something the boy is trying really..

    @Anon 2- yes seemingly the gal is victim but you don't know the boy's(her friend's) story yet.

    @Ramesh Sir- "life moves on.." yes this is what she needs to understand.

    @Harshad Sir- "care".. yes he does but why?

    @Serendipity- He will choose to say that "Let us walk through smoggy rains - Smog will hide your ciggie smoke & rain will hide your tears! "

    @Samvedna- I don't know about the boy but this would have been my words.

    @Sapna- for what has been said by boy, please read the comments and find the end, you have to find the answer for yourself..

    @All- Had I been the boy I would have said, "Some of God's greatest gifts are unanswered prayers. Believe in it."

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  13. Why the hell do you care about my cries???"

    He looked straight in her eyes and said ..................
    Yes ..a man, who will come and wipe your tears
    Yes you thought right
    Who will come running in your troublesome times..
    But if he does come will you be able to realize ..
    That he is the one who care about your cries ...

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  14. He looked straight in her eyes and said .....
    "U deserve d best in dis world ...need not b d only 1 person whom u r waiting 4...do not expect dat he wud turn his back n return 2 u....expectations hurt a lot sumtimes...blinded by his vision 2 cum back....u wont b able 2 c d 1 who really cares 4 u"
    :)

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  15. "I love the way the tears wash the smoke from your eyes and they sparkle the way they did... way before him. I care to be sure you see more clearly now and into your tomorrows."

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  16. He looked straight in her eyes and said "Life may not be how you want it to be also the people around you. But life definitely is how you make it and perceive it. Who you keep in your lives is your decision and who keeps you in their lives is not in your hands. I have always seen that glitter and shine in your eyes, whenever you go spreading such positive energy. I kept myself alive and happy by looking at you and now when you are like this I'll give all that back to you to bring you back from the deep tunnel you are burrowing yourself in."

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  17. i dont know about the guy. but i can continue from the girl's side.
    When Self respect is hurt, ignorance and illusions shall only ignite the person and surroundings. If left unattended, it shall fast spread preying on others self respect and igniting them too leading to massive destruction. Truth at the earliest is the only extinguisher of this. Forgiving, Realization shall only crop up on the grounds of self respect saved by truth. Better not hurt self respect! Extinguish it when it sparks. Don’t let it become a forest fire.

    nothing can help the girl except the person being back if not to be with her, just to help outaa it. but in such times men dont come back.

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