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Honest Confession

I'll not hesitate in telling you that...
I need you
I need you in all the weak moments of mine,
To be there with me
Just to be there with me...
And my only weak moments are the ones when you are not there.

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  1. WritingsForLifeOctober 22, 2010 at 8:45 AM

    oh yes, I know how that feels. Just when you need someone, they disappear, at all other times, they are around. Sigh.

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  2. Harshad MehtaOctober 22, 2010 at 10:05 AM

    Yes, it takes strength to say " I need you "

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  3. Vishal RajOctober 22, 2010 at 10:39 AM

    It takes a lot of guts to confess self weakness and to say that "I need you, right now". I do.

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  4. Sneh SagrikaOctober 22, 2010 at 12:36 PM

    So true.. But why does it become so hard for the person to tell this to her..

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  5. LoshiniOctober 22, 2010 at 5:32 PM

    the last line was beautiful

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  6. Beyond HorizonOctober 22, 2010 at 9:53 PM

    truly honest! wish i cud make such confession 2...

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  7. Blasphemous AestheteOctober 23, 2010 at 9:55 AM

    And I am confused when I am with you...
    I find peace when I'm confused

    Nice words.

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  8. JaspreetOctober 23, 2010 at 12:51 PM

    Once again, very touching and true-sometimes it is better to accept your weakness and urge him/her to become your strength, rather than keeping mum and feeling torn from inside, with each passing day.

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  9. Ramesh SoodOctober 23, 2010 at 12:56 PM

    Good expression dear...

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  10. IOctober 23, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    I'll be there with You... I'll never leave you alone... Believe in me.. I know You do.

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  11. AmanOctober 24, 2010 at 3:26 AM

    wow, that is so well written!

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  12. MeghaOctober 24, 2010 at 11:55 AM

    "i need u" lovely!!!!
    at times we need him/her to be our pillar of strength when we are falling apart. and don't we actually want them to just read our eyes rather having to confess!!!

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  13. Rashmirekha MannaOctober 24, 2010 at 3:48 PM

    Confessions are meant for the ears of God ... not mortals... who are themselves struggling to become even human...

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  14. UnknownOctober 26, 2010 at 5:51 PM

    so true. so simple, so straight-from-the-heart.

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  15. HootieBirdNovember 2, 2010 at 6:44 PM

    Your Heart Speaks ,as its heard ,another needs you

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  16. HootieBirdNovember 3, 2010 at 2:57 AM

    believe ,yes

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