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The You Left In Me

There is still so much of you left in me,
And with you gone, I am left empty and lone.
I thought I knew all the corners where I could hide,
This one corner is so dark and I feel so lost.

The day I manage to erase all of You from Me and rewrite anything new,
Everything would still start with an “I”. Coz “I” am still Me even if You are a different “You”.

** The last two lines are not mine, they are Maitraie's
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  1. KooOctober 16, 2010 at 2:58 PM

    I love this.

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  2. Beyond HorizonOctober 16, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    as usual few words...but said a lot :)

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  3. Sneh SagrikaOctober 17, 2010 at 10:25 AM

    Hmmm.. But somewhere I don't wanna start with an 'I'.. I want the you in me always.. not the new you.. the you whom I knew.. whom I loved..

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  4. zonedinOctober 17, 2010 at 11:29 PM

    I think it is beautiful! I just don't think the eraser works on this ink you have left etched into my heart.

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  5. rohiniOctober 19, 2010 at 10:51 PM

    beautifull......

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  6. PriyankaOctober 20, 2010 at 4:59 PM

    Touching.

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  7. Sheeba NairOctober 21, 2010 at 10:43 AM

    Awsum...

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  8. MeghaOctober 24, 2010 at 11:59 AM

    if u have ever been a part of me u will always remain no matter what, some impressions are permanent ...forever...and as long as u r a part of me I'll go on...

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  9. UnknownOctober 26, 2010 at 5:50 PM

    absolutely 'wow'! your handful of written lines always leave me totally speechless. :)

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  10. HootieBirdNovember 2, 2010 at 10:44 PM

    You are part of me as I am you ,Time allows the new .
    Where feeling Lost ,you shall never Feel again ,as the new ,covers your heart with theirs ,trusting that is always been part of You ,as old left with a final destinations ,towards allowing the new ,to be seen .

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