And with you gone, I am left empty and lone.
I thought I knew all the corners where I could hide,
This one corner is so dark and I feel so lost.
The day I manage to erase all of You from Me and rewrite anything new,
Everything would still start with an “I”. Coz “I” am still Me even if You are a different “You”.
** The last two lines are not mine, they are Maitraie's
I love this.
ReplyDeleteas usual few words...but said a lot :)
ReplyDeleteHmmm.. But somewhere I don't wanna start with an 'I'.. I want the you in me always.. not the new you.. the you whom I knew.. whom I loved..
ReplyDeleteI think it is beautiful! I just don't think the eraser works on this ink you have left etched into my heart.
ReplyDeletebeautifull......
ReplyDeleteTouching.
ReplyDeleteAwsum...
ReplyDeleteif u have ever been a part of me u will always remain no matter what, some impressions are permanent ...forever...and as long as u r a part of me I'll go on...
ReplyDeleteabsolutely 'wow'! your handful of written lines always leave me totally speechless. :)
ReplyDeleteYou are part of me as I am you ,Time allows the new .
ReplyDeleteWhere feeling Lost ,you shall never Feel again ,as the new ,covers your heart with theirs ,trusting that is always been part of You ,as old left with a final destinations ,towards allowing the new ,to be seen .